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Catherine Edmunds
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Postby Catherine Edmunds » Fri Mar 02, 2007 4:36 pm

KILLING TIME

I’m killing time and writing rhyme
while waiting for the paint to dry.
I murdered him, and for my crime
I’m killing time and writing rhyme
disguising bloodstains, gore and slime.
Thick paint will hide my guilt. That’s why
I’m killing time and writing rhyme
while waiting for the paint to dry.

:shock:

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Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Fri Mar 02, 2007 6:52 pm

delph_ambi wrote:KILLING TIME

I’m killing time and writing rhyme
while waiting for the paint to dry.
I murdered him, and for my crime
I’m killing time and writing rhyme
disguising bloodstains, gore and slime.
Thick paint will hide my guilt. That’s why
I’m killing time and writing rhyme
while waiting for the paint to dry.

:shock:

^ That is feckin' brilliant Delph :D ...

Excellent comedy too mate :lol: ...
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Postby psikottix » Fri Mar 02, 2007 9:29 pm

My friend was looking over my shoulder as I was reading this, and thought she'd have a go... she wasn't quite sure if it was essential to retain the same number of syllables in each line

Softest Angels

Soft mahogany pools of love
Brightly shining mirroring souls
Gaze joyfully upwards to those above
Soft mahogany pools of love
Purpose of living is giving thereof
Warming gently like glowing coals
Soft mahogany pools of love
Brightly shining mirroring souls

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Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Sat Mar 03, 2007 5:31 pm

psikottix wrote:My friend was looking over my shoulder as I was reading this, and thought she'd have a go... she wasn't quite sure if it was essential to retain the same number of syllables in each line

Softest Angels

Soft mahogany pools of love
Brightly shining mirroring souls
Gaze joyfully upwards to those above
Soft mahogany pools of love
Purpose of living is giving thereof
Warming gently like glowing coals
Soft mahogany pools of love
Brightly shining mirroring souls

That is absolutely beautiful. Your friend is a damn fine poet and wordsmith. I salute your friend :D ...
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Wendy Forder
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Postby Wendy Forder » Mon Mar 05, 2007 8:13 pm

Okay I fess up, its was my poem that I made Psi post. And since Lugh was crazy enough to encourage me, I have chucked out two more, albeit very different topics.

Wasn't quite sure if this was the right place to keep posting Triolets, so if they need to be moved, feel free to move them.

How, where, why

Frustration, inaction, where do I start
Near full to bursting with unexplained thought
Empty but yearning, an unfulfilled heart
Frustration, inaction, where do I start
Unknowing, but wanting to own my own part
The planet spins onward and I am still fraught
Frustration, inaction, where do I start
Near full to bursting with unexplained thought

This is a very silly one, but Psi said he liked the rhythm of it...

Puppies

Cuddly, snugly bundles of scrummy
Squidgy and lovable, slightly damp nuzzles
Want to inhale them like sweet smell of honey
Cuddly, snugly bundles of scrummy
Silky and fluffy and soft as a bunny
Snuffly noses and whiskery muzzles
Cuddly, snugly bundles of scrummy
Squidgy and lovable, slightly damp nuzzles


I am not at all obsessed by my hounds, honest :wink:


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