Two Gossips In A Café. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2005

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Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Thu Aug 31, 2006 11:42 am

delph_ambi wrote:I would go for all lower case, but include apostrophes to show the missing letters in 'olland and 'arrods.

This poem's fun, Lugh. Makes me smile each time I read it :D


Nice one Delph 8) ...

Knowing it brings on a smile is a great compliment mate. Thanks :D

Right. Here goes:-

two gossips in a café
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2005 / 2006. All Rights Reserved.
Editor - Catherine Edmunds.
    look at him
    posing git
    white cotton shirts
    and he always sits
    at that table

    i knew him
    way back when
    he was nobody
    but even then
    he ate lobster

    he drank wine
    fierce amounts
    water these days
    and by all accounts
    only salads


    out-bloody-rageous

    a rock star now
    won't even see us
    and that vicious cow he's
    hooked up with


    she's a scream
    thin as a rake
    i reckon she's out
    for all she can take

    more coffee kate?

    yeah. why not?
    I've a half day
    order more gateau
    it's my turn to pay

    nice here innit?

    too right, luv
    check out his butt
    a weekend with him
    i'd soon lose this gut

    shssssh. here they come


    hi michael
    hi mary-jean
    your hair was gorgeous
    in 'she' magazine.

    very pretty...

    new band mike?
    your life's all go
    thought you were brilliant
    on Jools 'olland's show


    ooooh. he's luverly.

    who?
    oh jools
    yeah really nice bloke.
    i met him in 'arrods
    but he never spoke


    bye michael...

    stuck up brats

    youth of today
    i think she's a front
    and he's really gay

    i thought that too

    happy though?

    Yeah, i suppose.
    right. you get the waiter.
    i'll powder me nose...


    same time next week?
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Postby Catherine Edmunds » Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:05 pm

Ha... you missed two. There's still a capital J and Y lurking in there Lugh. Happy proofreading... :wink:

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Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:15 pm

delph_ambi wrote:Ha... you missed two. There's still a capital J and Y lurking in there Lugh. Happy proofreading... :wink:


LOL & Oooops :P

Right. Here goes (again) :lol:

two gossips in a café
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2005 / 2006. All Rights Reserved.
Editor - Catherine Edmunds.
    look at him
    posing git
    white cotton shirts
    and he always sits
    at that table

    i knew him
    way back when
    he was nobody
    but even then
    he ate lobster

    he drank wine
    fierce amounts
    water these days
    and by all accounts
    only salads


    out-bloody-rageous

    a rock star now
    won't even see us
    and that vicious cow he's
    hooked up with


    she's a scream
    thin as a rake
    i reckon she's out
    for all she can take

    more coffee kate?

    yeah. why not?
    i've a half day
    order more gateau
    it's my turn to pay

    nice here innit?

    too right, luv
    check out his butt
    a weekend with him
    i'd soon lose this gut

    shssssh. here they come


    hi michael
    hi mary-jean
    your hair was gorgeous
    in 'she' magazine.

    very pretty...

    new band mike?
    your life's all go
    thought you were brilliant
    on jools 'olland's show


    ooooh. he's luverly.

    who?
    oh jools
    yeah really nice bloke.
    i met him in 'arrods
    but he never spoke


    bye michael...

    stuck up brats

    youth of today
    i think she's a front
    and he's really gay

    i thought that too

    happy though?

    yeah, i suppose.
    right. you get the waiter.
    i'll powder me nose...


    same time next week?
____________

This has been a fun experience Delph.

Nice one mate :D ...
Louis P. Burns aka Lugh
Administrator, editor & owner of the Sensitize © online community of forums and domain for artists, e-poets, filmmakers, media/music producers and writers working through here. To buy the Kindle book of Illustrated Poetry, Sensitize © - Volume One / Poems that could be Films if they were Funded by myself with illustrations by Welsh filmmaker and graphic artist; Norris Nuvo click here for N. Ireland and UK sales. If purchasing in the U.S.A. or internationally then please click here.

ASIN B00L1RS0UI

My writing is not covered by Creative Commons policy and may not be republished without permission. All rights reserved. All Sensitize © Arts sponsorship donations and postal inquiries to:

Louis P. Burns
42 Farland Way
DERRY
N. Ireland.
BT48 0RS
Telephone (UK): 028 71219225


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