Ode To John Peel. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006

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Postby Catherine Edmunds » Tue Sep 05, 2006 10:25 pm

Err... just noticed a few more tiny errors. :oops:

Should be 'well played, mr peel...' not 'well played mr. peel'..., or in other words, needs a comma after 'played'; the closing speech mark should come after the ellipses; and you should drop the full stop after mr as it's archaic.

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Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:08 pm

Changes made.

Cheers Delph mate. Much appreciated... :D
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Postby Salvador Oria » Mon Oct 02, 2006 7:05 pm

Where's Diana Rigg?
"...my dreams were all my own; i accounted for them to nobody; they
were my refuge when annoyed - my dearest pleasure when free."
mary shelley in her author's introduction to "frankestein", 1831.

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Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Mon Oct 02, 2006 7:06 pm

Argie wrote:Where's Diana Rigg?

I ate her :P
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