Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 10:25 pm
Err... just noticed a few more tiny errors.
Should be 'well played, mr peel...' not 'well played mr. peel'..., or in other words, needs a comma after 'played'; the closing speech mark should come after the ellipses; and you should drop the full stop after mr as it's archaic.
Should be 'well played, mr peel...' not 'well played mr. peel'..., or in other words, needs a comma after 'played'; the closing speech mark should come after the ellipses; and you should drop the full stop after mr as it's archaic.