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Re: Weed Poetry Anyone?

Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Sat Feb 14, 2009 7:30 pm

Salvador Oria wrote:I posted this yesterday, somewhere in here thinking I was standing on the right place but it seems I was not. Then I remembered it was in The Pleasure Dome at Multiply. This should have been the right place, so it goes again...

Shrinking loves.

Seven plants I had in flowerpots,
seven plants I lovingly cared for.
Three show their male attributes,
and four are now my dolls.
(c) 2009 Argie aka Salvador Oria


It's not a criticism Salvador but, why did you call this piece 'Shrinking Loves'? Aren't your female plants growing and coming into bloom? Remember, it is the closed flowering buds that hold the most potency for harvesters / tokers of weed (for medicinal purposes of course - coff!) :P :wink: :mrgreen: ...
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Re: Weed Poetry Anyone?

Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:06 pm

Salvador Oria wrote:Piping

Small metal pipes
or made from porcelain
hold chemicals
to be heated
by carefully
dropped embers.
Deeply aspired
and then blown
slowly
scenting the air
already perfumed;
one day
other flowers
will be plucked
and dried
to refill the pipes
one other day
next month,
or next year,
for an adventurous flight
or an odyssey
to dream
once again
without fear.

Salvador Oria aka Argie Copyright 2008
(All rights reserved)


Louis P. Burns aka Lugh wrote:Great poem Sal :D

slight spelling mistake 'parfumed' should be 'perfumed.' do you want me to copy it over to the healing herbs' pages when you've corrected it dude?

thanks for sharing 8) :mrgreen: ...



Salvador Oria wrote:Correction made and thanks to you BOLD! The probable cause was my normal pronunciation of this word... sorry.
:D

and oh, yes, copy it wherever you want it.


Thanks Salvador :)

This link will take you to a temporary designing webpage for your poem entitled - Piping':

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Please understand that I am still working on this page, so the layout will be different and your poem will be sited at the top of the page or perhaps down the lefthand side of the film window. It's not clear yet which is best lol ...

Cheers :)
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Re: Weed Poetry Anyone?

Postby Salvador Oria » Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:30 pm

Well, it's a poetical figure which I imagined will need no explanation; but, as it appears that it has to be explained, there I go.

My "loves" shrunk from seven candid unsexed little things to only four and God knows how many will stay to be duly harvested... The last remaining will know no impregnation i.e. no sex, and will stay virginal loves to give their lives to the gardener the day he comes to pluck the only part of their bodies he wants: their virginal parts!

(Freud, being not one of us, would surely have had something to say about this, but fortunately he is bloody dead).

Cheers.
"...my dreams were all my own; i accounted for them to nobody; they
were my refuge when annoyed - my dearest pleasure when free."
mary shelley in her author's introduction to "frankestein", 1831.

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Re: Weed Poetry Anyone?

Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Mon Feb 16, 2009 10:31 pm

Salvador Oria wrote:Well, it's a poetical figure which I imagined will need no explanation; but, as it appears that it has to be explained, there I go.

My "loves" shrunk from seven candid unsexed little things to only four and God knows how many will stay to be duly harvested... The last remaining will know no impregnation i.e. no sex, and will stay virginal loves to give their lives to the gardener the day he comes to pluck the only part of their bodies he wants: their virginal parts!

(Freud, being not one of us, would surely have had something to say about this, but fortunately he is bloody dead).

Cheers.

hahahahahahaa. Yeah Freud. Freud the Fraud. He knew nothing about weed :P ...

Bummer about your plants shrinking and presumably, dying? Were they getting enough water and sunlight dude? That's pretty important unless growing in an artificial environment such as the one seen in our film; Healing Herbs...

Still, you have a few more and hopefully they will grow to fullness and give you an ample yield of; euphoric inducing, pain-relieving tea, cookies and smokable herbs...
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