Concerning The Multiverse. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 1990

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Concerning The Multiverse. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 1990

Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Sat Jan 27, 2007 11:06 pm

concerning the multiverse
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 1990 ~ 2007. All Rights Reserved.
    "are we still spreading out?"
    a young universe did shout
    to be answered
    by one turning over:

    "of course we are dear
    but I hasten, don't fear.
    youth is the truth.
    now I'm younger."

    the now old one did shout;
    "how did this come about?"
    to be answered by itself
    turning over...
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Postby Catherine Edmunds » Tue Feb 13, 2007 7:39 pm

Love the poem; disagree with the formatting. This is how I would've done it.

"are we still spreading out?"
a young universe did shout
to be answered by one turning over:

"of course we are dear
but I hasten, don't fear.
youth is the truth, now I'm younger."

the now old one did shout;
"how did this come about?"
to be answered by itself turning over...


The scansion's still all over the place, but I don't think it particularly matters. This one's fun.

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Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Wed Feb 14, 2007 12:40 am

delph_ambi wrote:Love the poem; disagree with the formatting. This is how I would've done it.

"are we still spreading out?"
a young universe did shout
to be answered by one turning over:

"of course we are dear
but I hasten, don't fear.
youth is the truth, now I'm younger."

the now old one did shout;
"how did this come about?"
to be answered by itself turning over...


The scansion's still all over the place, but I don't think it particularly matters. This one's fun.


Excellent tuition Delph.

I like it :) ...

Thank you :D ...
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Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Wed Feb 14, 2007 12:42 am

concerning the multiverse
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 1990 ~ 2007. All Rights Reserved.
Editor - Catherine Edmunds.
    "are we still spreading out?"
    a young universe did shout
    to be answered by one turning over:

    "of course we are dear
    but I hasten, don't fear.
    youth is the truth, now I'm younger."

    the now old one did shout;
    "how did this come about?"
    to be answered by itself turning over...
Louis P. Burns aka Lugh
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ASIN B00L1RS0UI

My writing is not covered by Creative Commons policy and may not be republished without permission. All rights reserved. All Sensitize © Arts sponsorship donations and postal inquiries to:

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Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Thu May 15, 2008 12:57 pm

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