Sergi the snail wrote:Yes Lugh that sounds much better and yes it was translated. rather poorly from Polish
I like you version very much only the lineThe garnish revealed something like
'a cannibal's dinner'.
dosent work for me as my linewith potatos garnishing her head
like a cannibals dinner.
the word garnish makes more impact.
This is wonderful though Poets in different toungs helping each others work
I very much like what is haappening
Perhaps over time, this piece will develop even more. Seems to be the nature of art. That would be cool and organic