Re: Souns better
Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 5:34 pm
Perhaps over time, this piece will develop even more. Seems to be the nature of art. That would be cool and organicSergi the snail wrote:Yes Lugh that sounds much better and yes it was translated. rather poorly from Polish
I like you version very much only the linedosent work for me as my lineThe garnish revealed something like
'a cannibal's dinner'.the word garnish makes more impact.with potatos garnishing her head
like a cannibals dinner.
This is wonderful though Poets in different toungs helping each others work
I very much like what is haappening
