In The Hum. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2008.

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In The Hum. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2008.

Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:21 am

in the hum by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2008. All rights reserved.
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Lugh © 2008. All rights reserved.


    in the hum
    an unending babble
    of drivel spews into my room
    and i sit there, terrified to go out
    gun crime statistics
    aimed at my head go off
    the bang a backdrop
    the very rhythm of my life
    i respond as always
    by eating more junk food
    inching ever closer
    to death by natural causes
    humming a tune from my youth
    in defiance
    ...
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Re: In The Hum. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2008.

Postby Amanda Gillespie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 3:19 am

Louis,

This is a very honest piece of writing. I like the fear of the mainstream violence that hides outside and how the internal struggle can be even more damaging. Control, over the humming, acknowledging the struggle and continuing in 'defiance'. I like this piece very much.

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Re: In The Hum. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2008.

Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Fri Nov 07, 2008 3:54 am

Amanda Koser wrote:Louis,

This is a very honest piece of writing. I like the fear of the mainstream violence that hides outside and how the internal struggle can be even more damaging. Control, over the humming, acknowledging the struggle and continuing in 'defiance'. I like this piece very much.


Thanks Amanda :D

I'm not sure whether this is a completed piece or not yet. It works but I feel there is more I want to add to it to tease the malevolent underbelly of the world (the mainstream media) and address its hostility towards all of our calmness. Is it just me or is everyone at breaking point with how we're governed in our livingrooms by hype, panic and spin that forever shifts, leaving us uncertain of everything and wondering what happened to the plans we made 15 minutes ago?

I was discussing this piece with Andy earlier on messenger and we may work collaboratively on it to develop some sort of menacing drum and bass e-poem to video for the domain and website. I would really enjoy that.

Cheers for the feedback my friend. Very much appreciated.

Best wishes...
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Administrator, editor & owner of the Sensitize © online community of forums and domain for artists, e-poets, filmmakers, media/music producers and writers working through here. To buy the Kindle book of Illustrated Poetry, Sensitize © - Volume One / Poems that could be Films if they were Funded by myself with illustrations by Welsh filmmaker and graphic artist; Norris Nuvo click here for N. Ireland and UK sales. If purchasing in the U.S.A. or internationally then please click here.

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My writing is not covered by Creative Commons policy and may not be republished without permission. All rights reserved. All Sensitize © Arts sponsorship donations and postal inquiries to:

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In The Hum DnB. By Andy West and Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2

Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Thu Dec 18, 2008 5:46 am

in the hum A collaborative project by Andy West and Louis P. Burns aka Lugh / http://www.upstaterenegadeproductions.com/
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This piece will feature as part of a broader project initiated by Andy West and entitled; Digital Disturbance Theatre. We ( Sensitize © / http://www.upstaterenegadeproductions.com ) are currently seeking input on this project to make a music video made up from either illustrations or original photography by our members. To read more about this unique offer please click the following link:

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