Amanda Koser wrote:Louis,
This is a very honest piece of writing. I like the fear of the mainstream violence that hides outside and how the internal struggle can be even more damaging. Control, over the humming, acknowledging the struggle and continuing in 'defiance'. I like this piece very much.
I'm not sure whether this is a completed piece or not yet. It works but I feel there is more I want to add to it to tease the malevolent underbelly of the world (the mainstream media) and address its hostility towards all of our calmness. Is it just me or is everyone at breaking point with how we're governed in our livingrooms by hype, panic and spin that forever shifts, leaving us uncertain of everything and wondering what happened to the plans we made 15 minutes ago?
I was discussing this piece with Andy earlier on messenger and we may work collaboratively on it to develop some sort of menacing drum and bass e-poem to video for the domain and website. I would really enjoy that.
Cheers for the feedback my friend. Very much appreciated.