world of gossiping landlords

[sprinkles]

the man is class

[sprinkles]

is it ok for me to wear a tank top repitition repition repition

[the_leander]

I read the poem, I just wish I understood it, it just seems a little too surreal for my mind to cope with...

Meh, perhaps it'll be clearer if I read it again in the morning.

[Louis P. Burns aka Lugh]

is it ok for me to wear a tank top repitition repition repition

Does the tank top work for you? I mean, I don't even think about writing unless I have my lucky elephant's scrotum, witch doctor, leprechaun and a fresh selection of pens arranged neatly on my pc bench. I'm convinced it's the howling and wailing the elephant lets out from the bathroom down the hall that inspires me and I've even tested this theory out. The other day while mid-sentence I stabbed the elephant's scrotum with a new ball tip pen and as if by magic, wrote two paragraphs... The witch doctor and leprechaun seemed impressed and I was cured of Bubonic Plague and given three wishes, all at once...

All I'm saying is if the tank top works for you, then cool Sprinkles, but is it the bright purple one?

[sprinkles]

i have never experienced love

[Catherine Edmunds]

Then DON'T wear the tank top. Please.

The poem's great, btw. Needs editing to clean up the typos, but that's easy enough. Great mix of images; made me think of all sorts of films - spy stuff, gangster stuff, etc. Very visual. Good writing.