ack reads the health benefits of death

[Richard Hedley Atkinson]

go to this link to be
AMAZED
and
FILLED WITH SILENT HORROR
and
ALMOST FALL OVER WITH FRIGHT
OR FIDGET A LOT

here is the link
you may need to paste it into your browser ?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oAqXFn_WHo

[Louis P. Burns aka Lugh]

go to this link to be
AMAZED
and
FILLED WITH SILENT HORROR
and
ALMOST FALL OVER WITH FRIGHT
OR FIDGET A LOT

here is the link
you may need to paste it into your browser ?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1oAqXFn_WHo

I did none of the above Ack. I must be broken. Quick! Call the poetry nurse ... However I really enjoyed the piece and the spin its content takes through almost all aspects of living and life. The comedy in this poem too is superb. Then of course there's the fact that you took it that one further stage and filmed the performance of it. It's a bit of a shame you don't have a digital recorder / sampler though. With one of those you could record it incrementally and then edit it all together so it runs without pauses in between. I had the same problem for ages until I got the DVD camera which allowed Diarmuid to edit the audio and remove all the deep breaths and 'bumps' from air hitting the microphones. Maybe some benevolent soul out there will fund / sponsor you to buy this equipment which is industry standard for all audio dubbing these days...

As always, your poetry is original, packed with insight and aiming to address situations.

Great stuff mate ...