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nuttin

Postby Richard Hedley Atkinson » Tue Aug 26, 2008 10:25 pm

nuttin

in time
the clouds will heal
like
sheep

on the
silent moor.

but
when

will
sheep
stop

following.
me ?

we are pod children
raised and bred.

we find laughter
in bin bags

and sugar our selves
with
mint.

we find
all

we
find
through

true
lurve ?

no clouds
above
today
just
silent whispers

like
a candle
with no
wick
or
wax,

I burn and
burn out
inside
again.

silent laughter
flocks to my
minds eye

like
a silent shower
of
pain

waiting
for
release.

we come from
nuttin
and

go
to
nuttin,

is
nuttin
all
we
are ?
let the spirit wane for the art to appear

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Postby Richard Hedley Atkinson » Tue Aug 26, 2008 10:30 pm

nuttin is english slang for nothing.
let the spirit wane for the art to appear

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Re: nuttin

Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Wed Aug 27, 2008 10:59 am

Damn fine writing Mr. Ack. Damn fine 8) . The whole piece is a subtle mine field of observations made and philosophical launching pads. This is one such example:

ack wrote:like
a candle
with no
wick
or
wax,

I burn and
burn out
inside
again.

Quality work old chap. Thanks for sharing...
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lift off. destination moonbase 9

Postby Louis P. Burns aka Lugh » Sun Sep 07, 2008 11:10 pm

hi ack,

can you click, read and respond to this;

http://upstaterenegadeproductions.com/m ... =3961#3961

please?

thanks mate :) ...
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