Two Gossips In A Café. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2005

[Louis P. Burns aka Lugh]

I would go for all lower case, but include apostrophes to show the missing letters in 'olland and 'arrods.

This poem's fun, Lugh. Makes me smile each time I read it

Nice one Delph ...

Knowing it brings on a smile is a great compliment mate. Thanks

Right. Here goes:-

two gossips in a café
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2005 / 2006. All Rights Reserved.
Editor - Catherine Edmunds.

• look at him
  posing git
  white cotton shirts
  and he always sits
  at that table
  
  i knew him
  way back when
  he was nobody
  but even then
  he ate lobster
  
  he drank wine
  fierce amounts
  water these days
  and by all accounts
  only salads
  
  out-bloody-rageous
  
  a rock star now
  won't even see us
  and that vicious cow he's
  hooked up with
  
  she's a scream
  thin as a rake
  i reckon she's out
  for all she can take
  
  more coffee kate?
  
  yeah. why not?
  I've a half day
  order more gateau
  it's my turn to pay
  
  nice here innit?
  
  too right, luv
  check out his butt
  a weekend with him
  i'd soon lose this gut
  
  shssssh. here they come
  
  hi michael
  hi mary-jean
  your hair was gorgeous
  in 'she' magazine.
  
  very pretty...
  
  new band mike?
  your life's all go
  thought you were brilliant
  on Jools 'olland's show
  
  ooooh. he's luverly.
  
  who?
  oh jools
  yeah really nice bloke.
  i met him in 'arrods
  but he never spoke
  
  bye michael...
  
  stuck up brats
  
  youth of today
  i think she's a front
  and he's really gay
  
  i thought that too
  
  happy though?
  
  Yeah, i suppose.
  right. you get the waiter.
  i'll powder me nose...
  
  same time next week?

[Catherine Edmunds]

Ha... you missed two. There's still a capital J and Y lurking in there Lugh. Happy proofreading...

[Louis P. Burns aka Lugh]

Ha... you missed two. There's still a capital J and Y lurking in there Lugh. Happy proofreading...

LOL & Oooops

Right. Here goes (again)

two gossips in a café
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2005 / 2006. All Rights Reserved.
Editor - Catherine Edmunds.

• look at him
  posing git
  white cotton shirts
  and he always sits
  at that table
  
  i knew him
  way back when
  he was nobody
  but even then
  he ate lobster
  
  he drank wine
  fierce amounts
  water these days
  and by all accounts
  only salads
  
  out-bloody-rageous
  
  a rock star now
  won't even see us
  and that vicious cow he's
  hooked up with
  
  she's a scream
  thin as a rake
  i reckon she's out
  for all she can take
  
  more coffee kate?
  
  yeah. why not?
  i've a half day
  order more gateau
  it's my turn to pay
  
  nice here innit?
  
  too right, luv
  check out his butt
  a weekend with him
  i'd soon lose this gut
  
  shssssh. here they come
  
  hi michael
  hi mary-jean
  your hair was gorgeous
  in 'she' magazine.
  
  very pretty...
  
  new band mike?
  your life's all go
  thought you were brilliant
  on jools 'olland's show
  
  ooooh. he's luverly.
  
  who?
  oh jools
  yeah really nice bloke.
  i met him in 'arrods
  but he never spoke
  
  bye michael...
  
  stuck up brats
  
  youth of today
  i think she's a front
  and he's really gay
  
  i thought that too
  
  happy though?
  
  yeah, i suppose.
  right. you get the waiter.
  i'll powder me nose...
  
  same time next week?

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This has been a fun experience Delph.

Nice one mate ...