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Posted: **Sat Jul 22, 2006 12:03 am**

jo wrote:
I think I get the point of it all now. In Japanese most things are 1 or 2 letter syllables, making it bloody hard to do the ole 5 7 5 thing, when they have such long words.

I can see the point in writing it in japanese, coz its hard and sort of like a puzzle. I still can't see the point in English (sorry).

Put that in yer pipe and smoke it Mr Lugh, unless you can do better?

psssst! pay attention...
One For Jo. A Haiku by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 19th July, 2006.

Jo chats a lot here.
once? twice? light came as she wrote.
light spread through us all...

Jo, I write these because I find them fun to do, that's all. Bit like someone else doing a crossword or knitting...

I'm not into conforming unless there's a point to it in my creative work. I don't see any point in someone from the West, attempting the Japanese style and choose to believe that this is an evolving form

...

Posted: **Sat Jul 22, 2006 12:25 am**

one breath, one step.
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 22nd July, 2006.

everybody.
one breath, one step at a time.
that's how to live best...

Posted: **Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:15 pm**

your poetry sings
of wisdom and compassion
keep writing, my friend

Posted: **Sun Jul 23, 2006 11:36 pm**

how to make pine shine.
A woodwork lesson and Haiku By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006.

after sanding pine,
rub bee's wax into the grain.
it will make it shine...

Posted: **Thu Jul 27, 2006 12:40 am**

senseless
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 27th July, 2006. All Rights Reserved.

sickened by these wars.
wasps hit windows. news blares on.
it doesn't make sense.

Posted: **Sat Jul 29, 2006 7:50 pm**

countdown
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 29th July, 2006.

five. four. three. two. one.
ignition sequence started.
we have lift off. boom..!

Posted: **Sat Aug 05, 2006 12:22 am**

observations made
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 4th August, 2006.

observations made.
crows shiver. icy rooftops.
grey fog moves slowly...

Posted: **Tue Aug 08, 2006 2:16 pm**

hippie trip.
A Haiku for Hippies by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006.

"diggin' the scene maaan".
dew on foliage and grasses.
"i love our world maaan"...

Posted: **Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:55 am**

nice one kermit.
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006

shell blasts or burned skin?
froth round eggs in rainwater.
tungara frog knows.

Inspired by this article in today's Guardian Unlimited, The Observer.

Posted: **Sun Aug 20, 2006 1:50 pm**

one for a writer friend.
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 20.08.06.

Park bench or pc.
Hot days. Ice cold mango juice.
'I love all her work'.

Posted: **Sun Aug 20, 2006 5:39 pm**

can't hear nuffin' mate!
still dj's in ibiza!
deaf, but he feels bass!

While writing this piece I had an image of two Cockney or London accented men standing by a sub-woofer speaker which is pumping out very loud dance or Rave music in an Ibiza nightclub. One is explaining (shouting) to the other about what happened to Frankie Wilde, the DJ who became deaf at the height of his career on the Ibiza holiday circuit. Great movie by the way folks. Very touching and holding a postive message for disabled people everywhere.

To read about Frankie Wilde and the movie, It's All Gone Pete Tong, click here.

Hyperlink in this post is to the Internet Movie Database ©
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0388139/

Posted: **Mon Aug 21, 2006 11:10 am**

These are great, Lugh. I must write a few... haven't for weeks now. (Rummages through newspaper for inspiration.)
Right, here's one about the new rules for postage that just came in today.

Fold A4 to fit
C5. Fit four in that way.
Eh? Forfeit? What for?

Posted: **Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:08 pm**

That Adam Crozier!
From F.A. to the P.O.
he's hitting the post.

Posted: **Mon Aug 21, 2006 4:46 pm**

delph_ambi wrote:These are great, Lugh. I must write a few... haven't for weeks now. (Rummages through newspaper for inspiration.)
Right, here's one about the new rules for postage that just came in today.

Fold A4 to fit
C5. Fit four in that way.
Eh? Forfeit? What for?

Nice one Delph

spacecadet wrote:That Adam Crozier!
From F.A. to the P.O.
he's hitting the post.

Dave, do you want me to set up a folder for your work mate? Take a look on the New Media Poetry section of Sensitize for examples. It would really cool if you had your own collection on here too...

Posted: **Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:06 pm**

This is a dreadful, dreadful site, and I apologise profusely for posting the link, but... it's quite funny too. Welcome to the genuine haiku generator

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haiku

One For Jo...

One Breath, One Step. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006

How To Make Pine Shine. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006.

Senseless. by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 27th July, 2006.

countdown. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006.

observations made. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006.

hippie trip. A Haiku for Hippies by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh

Nice One Kermit. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006

One For A Writer Friend. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006