Feedback on The Next Science by Sprinkles...

[Louis P. Burns aka Lugh]

Click here to read The Next Science by Sprinkles.

I think it's a magnificent and timely poem and a thought inspiring piece ...

Nice delivery Sprinkles ...

If you feel like commenting on the piece. Can you please do so here Sprinkles? Likewise to all other members.

I will now create pages for all contributing poets and writers. Then at a later date, compile them to collection on themes that we can all add to...

Thanks and once again;-

Sprinkles

Nice delivery

[the_leander]

Excellent piece mate, I look forward to seeing future work by you

[sprinkles]

i deleted most of my answers but thank you all darlings

[Diesel Engine]

I like this
it is paranoid and pessemistic
Sounded like the ramblings of a schizophrenic
East Berlin Athlete circa 1976

you should submit it to Ireland's Own
or the Readers Digest
they will be confused

Tell me Sprinkles are you a sponge or a stone?

[sprinkles]

i like to think of myself as a sponge for i am forever fleecing large companies from argos to abbey..........im off to the pawn shop catch you later you big sack of blood and mucus

[Catherine Edmunds]

Great piece of writing. Gripping (though the last few lines veer perilously close to cliché -- maybe there's some way to keep the startling originality going right to the end). Spieces should be species, but that was the only typo I noticed.