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this sober rythym guitarist reflects

Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 2:00 am
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh
this sober rythym guitarist reflects
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006. All Rights Reserved.
  • joint rolled, band practice finished
    listening to playbacks
    on a battered deck
    those days were fun.
    smoke drifting
    sky high

    when we were one

    two, three, four. drum samples, bass
    maximum distortion
    guitars screaming in
    like bunnymen
    we echoed
    U2

    we were young then

    i still have the demo tapes
    smoke the occasional spliff
    but to be honest
    life ain't so good
    i drank so
    she left

    how are you dude?

Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:24 am
by Catherine Edmunds
Love this poem. One of your best, Lugh. I wouldn't change a word.

Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 11:16 pm
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh
Thank Delph :) .

It's a simple structure of syllable count decreasing then gaining.

I'm proud of this piece :D ...