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The Field And The Apple Tree by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh ©.

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the field and the apple tree
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006.
  • after all these years
    the field and the apple tree
    ah, the memories
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Post by Catherine Edmunds »

Now that is exquisite. A perfect haiku.

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Post by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh »

Cheers Delph :D

I've had a turbulent week to say the least. When I wrote The Field And The Apple Tree, I was seeking to access some calmness and regain inner peace. I find writing or playing guitar (when I have one), very soothing...

Thanks for the feedback and compliment on this piece mate. I really appreciate it...
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Haiku?

:lol: :lol: :lol:

In all seriousness, under a particular web browser I used to use, whenever you mistyped for otherwise couldn't connect to a web page, it would come up with the error 404, and then underneath have the following haiku such as this:

Rather than a beep
Or a rude error message,
These words: "File not found."

Another strange piece of geek trivia brought to you by...
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Post by Catherine Edmunds »

Nice one Alan :D

I've just got another one on the Guardian site. :oops:
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Post by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh »

delph_ambi wrote:I've just got another one on the Guardian site. :oops:
Way to go Delph :-D

Congratulations mate :)

Click here or the link below to see Delph's latest Haiku on the Guardian website...

http://books.guardian.co.uk/games/haiku/

Toooooooooo Coooool :D

Hyperlink and link in this post are to The Guardian Unlimited Books webpage.
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One For Syd Barrett...

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black sky with peppered white.
Haiku Poem by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006.
  • where are you tonight?
    stars remind, eternity.
    I'm disillusioned
    .
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Congrats delph :D
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Nice one lugh :D
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Cheers Alan :-)

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Cheers Alan :-)

Here's another...

Bukowski's goatee
A Haiku Poem by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 13th July, 2006.
  • Bukowski's goatee.
    words tangle in a white beard,
    then fall and are caught.
A gift for our creative friends over on MSN Bukowski's goatee... Here's hoping they join us
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It Is Homicide. A Haiku by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2006

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it is homicide.
Ode to Jean Charles de Menezes.
A Haiku Poem by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 16th July, 2006.

  • it is homicide.
    shot dead on a hot morning,
    running for a train.

Inspired by this...
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Post by joanne chapman »

Now, I know you dedicated writers are going to laugh at me but, what is the point of haiku?

I have googled it http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku but still my tiny brain just don't understand.... why? :?

In all honesty I have never heard of it until now. If I had read something like this before you all spoke of it, then I would have thought that the author had good ideas and keywords but couldn't organise them to complete his/her work.

Feel free to slate me, but I would sooner understand than not. :oops:

Jox
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Post by the_leander »

I think southpark described a haiku as being something along the lines of

"A Haiku is a japanese poem thats stupid and makes no sense"....

Works for me :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Post by joanne chapman »

the_leander wrote:I think southpark described a haiku as being something along the lines of

"A Haiku is a japanese poem thats stupid and makes no sense"....

Works for me :lol: :lol: :lol:
:lol: Ah, so it's not me then.

Why do so many people write it? Very strange.
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Post by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh »

I like the challenge of writing to such a short structure and the added discipline of mentioning the elements or nature, hones that. Plain and simple. Bit like Karate. Learn the smaller moves and the bigger ones become easier to exercise...

Why don't you two try writing one instead of questioning it? You might even enjoy it. Honest :) ...
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