Cheers Alan...the_leander wrote:<blink>
All of my media contacts (bar you) are in tech...
But assuming I had some into other things, I couldn't show them that on it's own, hell I have to be honest, I'd be hesitant about showing it to them at all, you come off sounding like a ranting zealot in that message...
Dunno, it could just be me, but I honestly think you need to sit down and work on a better delivery patter, tone it down, keep it simple, stick to the facts. Claiming things left and right (even if you have the evidence to back it up) won't get you anywhere, leave that to the journalists to put in.
I mean it's your call ultimately, but as it stands, I don't honestly think I could do much with the above on it's own.
I'm taking a few days out. I need to regain focus...
Exhausted...